After boarding the story out, there seems to be a lot of walking/running with nothing much to it. I am going to have the traveler waving the torch around trying to look at things, but I know that will get old fast. I will probably add in boulders/rocks that he needs to step over (and then jump over when he is running for the exit) to add some kind of obstacle to make it a little more interesting. If anyone has any other ideas on what else I could add to make that "calm before the storm" less boring, let me know!
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