Revised Animatic 1

The more times I watched my original animatic, I felt like it was too fast. So, here is a revised version of my first animatic. I still would like to add an establishing shot at the beginning if I can.

https://video.wixstatic.com/video/e97e9a_d3618d4b380f46458cae3e2d89726b50/1080p/mp4/file.mp4