Here is my adjusted animatic. I added some beats and moved a couple of camera angles so it didn't seem so flat and distant as per the class's suggestions.
Thoughts on the title? I wanted the title's meaning to be obvious after having watched the film, if it is too obvious beforehand then I'll probable change it. Let me know what you think or if you have a better title you think would work (obviously I have a good amount of time to decide on this).
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